redcladidealist: (Huh...)
redcladidealist ([personal profile] redcladidealist) wrote 2011-09-13 03:09 am (UTC)

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[Lloyd follows through with the motion of the attack, twisting and preparing to attack or defend. Then he pauses, evaluating the effectiveness of the moves as a whole.]

You're right. I think that works a lot better.

You wanna go at it again?

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