redcladidealist: (Stand back!)
redcladidealist ([personal profile] redcladidealist) wrote 2011-09-19 01:14 am (UTC)

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Then let's do this.

[Once he's put his other sword aside, Lloyd takes up position as well. He feels so awkward with only one sword in his hand, like he's off balance or out of position-

-and he is. Someone who's using only one weapon shouldn't be in a stance like that when they're about to attack. And when he lunges, striking out to test Ace's defense, there's a hole in his guard a mile wide.]

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