Vatheon - Homework project for Raine
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redcladidealistRaine caught Lloyd and Luke fon Fabre texting to each other using horrible grammar and spelling. She assigned them to write a paper on the importance of grammar.
This is the result.
and no one would be confuzed. You needapo appo appostrofees to becos they show were your missing letters like in don't.
"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?
There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.
Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".
There's also this thing
;
That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.
(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)
I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?
You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.
(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)
… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?
But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.
Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".
Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…
(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)
They both sound fine to me.
Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!
Lloyd Irving
Luke fon Fabre
(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)
(Me too.)
[Actual posting of said homework happened here.]
This is the result.
and no one would be confuzed. You need
"apostrophes", I think. We're supposed to spell right too, right?
There's some other ones in here too, but I don't think it's important.
Anyway, yeah, lists are better. But like, if you can't do a list, then it's better to use them. You know, stuff like "Anise, Natalia and Tear went to buy things".
There's also this thing
;
That's like a period but not. But I don't use it unless I feel like it.
(Note off to the side next to the line about spelling -> I dont think so she just sed we were suposed to write about gramer)
I don't evan know what that is. Why do you need an extra thing for a peroid if its just a peroid?
You have to use capitel letters to becos that's for names and things. If you don't use one than you don't know if your talking about Colette's dog Carmel or about carmel candy. You also have to use them at the begining of sentances but I don't know why.
(Beside the previous note -> I don't know, she sounds pretty strict. But if you say so.)
… You know, I don't know either. Maybe it's just to let people know you're starting a sentence, but shouldn't that be obvious enough with all the periods and stuff?
But yeah, you also have to capitalize the I. "i am Luke" isn't right, but "I am Luke" is.
Apostrophes can also shorten words, so they're good to have. You can shorten up "is not" to "isn't", and would of to "would've".
Or wait, is it would of or would have? The last one sounds right, but…
(And a small note -> Guy would know, ask him.)
They both sound fine to me.
Any way that's why grammer's importent. Its also importent becos profesor Raine seys it is. Their's probabley more stuff we forgot but we only have to write five pages so that's it!
Lloyd Irving
Luke fon Fabre
(Note at the bottom -> Man I'm so glad thats over.)
(Me too.)
[Actual posting of said homework happened here.]